Persuasive Essay: Evaluating Ads

          "Lose yourself with the Samsung Wave Smartphone," consumers are attracted at their first look at the advertisement. This print ad introduces Samsung mobile phone. The ad uses bright color background that make the phone at the center stands out. The picture of a person's eye looking down at the phone attracts lot of people to read this ad. This ad is use to make the product be known to the people and to put it in the market to compete against other competitions. It was introduces to people who are interested in buying phones, and working adults who can afford, This ad has both positive and negative aspects, the positive aspects are repetition, composition, and association. While the negative aspects of omission and diversion.

          This ad shows many repetitions, which is a kind of positive persuasive technique. The name of the brand, "Samsung" is repeated for 6times. It is repeated for many times so that it would be recognized to people. "Samsung Wave Smartphone," the name of the phone is repeated for 2times. The name of the movie, "The hangover" is also repeated for 2times. The name of this movie is repeated, so that people will be interested in watching this movie on the phone. This advertisement is place at Samsung shop in different Malls and also on television.

          The advertiser has organizes the ad's composition well. It uses light blue colored background, with the picture of the mobile at the center of the page. The background color makes the mobile stand outs. As the reader turns the page, he could be attracted to the picture of a person's eye at the top of the page, looking down at the phone. The fonts are easy to read with different sizes. Important words or slogan are in big size, so people could see and recognize it easily. The brand name of the product is place at the bottom right of the page, where reader usually turns the page. As he flips to the next page, he would recognize the name.

          The ad also uses association, which shows the techniques that are use to convince people. Pathos, logos, and ethos are all presented in the ad. The picture of a person's eye gives different feelings to different people. The ad also tells the reader about the phone, it is written in small fonts for people who are interested. There is a picture of a part of a movie "The Hangover" which is put in the phone, to show that the phone can watch movie. "Lose yourself with Samsung Wave Smartphone," the slogan is print in big fonts under the picture of the mobile. Both slogan and transfer are use as a persuasive technique of this ad. The ad uses positive words, images, and ideas that are positive about the product.

          The ad also has the negative aspects which are omission and diversion. There is no price stated, so people don’t know how much it would be. The materials are not there and also no warranty. The ad uses pictures that drag people away from thinking about the negative point. Readers may have the negative point in mind, but as looking at the ad, he gets attracted to the picture and forgets what he thinks.

          This advertisement is not effective. There are lots of positive aspects, but it doesn't convince people. The ad doesn't show that the product is more special than other brand. The information needed is not there. To improve this ad, there should be more pictures about the phone, tell more about the functions, so people can have more idea about it. Put the prices so people can decide if they can afford. The ad should shows that this phone is better than other phone.

      

Persuasive Essay: Evaluating Ads

           'Mini but Mighty', it attracts the customer who need a small phone with lots of applications. This ad is trying to introduce the phone to the public. It aims at people who ca afford, middle class people. The ad focuses on the mobile with a finger on it to show that the phone is small. There is a paper near the phone which is drawn as a picture of the applications in the phone. The ads prove to be good to customer in showing the mobile that is small, but they didn't show clearly what the paper at the back is for.

           This ad shows repetition with word of the brand, "Sony Ericsson". This make the customer remember the brand name well. The word is shown on many part of the page. This grabs more attention of the people that are looking at it. This ad is on the football magazine called FourFourTwo.
           The composition of the ad is done quite well. If the people would see this at first sight, they will get caught by the image of the finger that is touching the phone. The background of the page is not focus, so this make the phone very attracted. There are some sentences which describe the phone. The colors are also very bright on the mobile comparing to the background. The phone is about 3 fingers big.
           The ad also include association to influence more people. The technique that they use to convince people is logos. The ad provide facts and reason to buy the product. They are consider 'plain folks' and 'bribery'. The product are good enough for ordinary people. They provide extra things like headphones.

           The ads also has negative aspect, omission. The ad has no price written on it. If the price was written on it, it could make people to decide. They should have told he size of the screen and a little bit more details of the phone.
           There are also confusion in the ad. The paper on the ad does not indicate properly what it is for. More clarification should be made on this part of the ad. People could be confused with what they are tryig to show.

           The ads prove to be good to customer in showing the mobile that is small, but they didn't show clearly what the paper at the back was for. I think this ad doesn't convince or persuade people to buy. The details are too less. Prices have not been included. The paper at the back which looks attractive and important has not been clarified.